…e E.B. White: Yes, but it’ll cost you a fraction of the reader’s attention. And that’s the problem. A good writer never, ever wants the reader to have to go back and scan a sentence a second time. She never wants the reader’s brow to twitch in perplexity for even the slightest second before thinking, Oh, I get it.
I am getting there; not quite there yet!
The misuse of commas, seems to be my forte!