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Utterly compelling.

If you don't mind, I would love to make a following suggestions;

1. Your writing would enjoy huge traction with shorter paragraphs

2. Having shorter articles would also move the needle.

Given your intellectual heft, it would be nice to see you rock our world.

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Adebayo Adeniran
Adebayo Adeniran

Written by Adebayo Adeniran

A lifelong bibliophile, who seeks to unleash his energy on as many subjects as possible

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